What a captivating story! I would have loved to know more about Pels' journey and whether or not she got out of Nitro Island. I agree with her, the old man definitely switched her tickets! What if her parents start searching for her? I'm sure her dad will blame himself for not flying with her in the first place.
Hehe, lovely story. Well done! 🙂
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Thanks for reading this. I'm glad it was interesting for you. Perhaps this is due for a part two