The sun's rays illuminated his seat, warning him that it was dawn, reflecting directly on his face from the bus window, observing the constructions of the city that he had never seen, concrete masses that were much more imposing than he had even imagined.
how you describe and narrate thing is really wonderful.
I felt like I was seeing everything, I felt like I was in the book. It really hooked me.
I hope to see how this ends. I'm black and I'm so happy all the racism and discrimination are a thing of the past now or atleast they have been greatly reduced.
I'm happy we now see ourselves as humans and as equals, it would have been really hard living in those times. Thanks for sharing.
(ENG) Hi thank you very much for reading my story and commenting. Thank God times have changed, every day the world accepts more and more that we are all equal and have the same rights, although there are still parts that need to change much more, definitely those times were hard and terrible for some people, so I wanted to pay tribute to them with my narrative trying that the reader could feel in their own flesh how horrible it was to exist in those years for a poor woman like Whitney. Greetings.
(ESP) Hola muchas gracias por leer mi historia y comentar. Gracias a dios los tiempos han cambiado, cada día el mundo acepta más que todos somos iguales y tenemos los mismos derechos, aunque aún existen partes que deben cambiar mucho más, definitivamente esos tiempos fueron duros y terribles para algunas personas, por eso quise rendirles un homenaje con mi narrativa intentando que el lector pudiera sentir en carne propia lo horrible que era existir en esos años para una mujer pobre como Whitney. Saludos.