Bob The Blobs Adventure - Part 1

in Writing Club3 years ago

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Hello my fellow geeks!
I am now posting as story inspired by @therneau's The Adventures Of Freddy The Flea. Go check it out, its good!
Cover image credits at the bottom of this post.
But without further ado lets begin.

Bob The Blobs Adventure - Part 1

Our story begins in the lands of Avania far in the west mountains and there was a small village called Goowey village where all of the Blobs dwelt. You might think that Blobs are aggressive creatures but these Blobs were peaceful as ever.

In Goowey village there was a young boy Blob named Bob. His father went on great adventures and mysteriously vanished when Bob was 5 years old and since then Bob was left with his mother. He liked going on adventures to well... anywhere! His dream was to venture out of the borders of the village just like his father.

One regular morning, Bob woke up but this morning Bob knew that today was the day, the day that he just turned 16 years old and like all other Blobs he was a true Blobman.

(I made Blob men Blobman and Blobmen and for women Blob Blobwen and Blodwena these words will be mentioned in future parts of the story.)

And I think you know just what was in his mind when he wished his mother goodbye and stepped out the door... yup! He was going on an adventure!

So he packed all the things that he needed including his wooden sword that his father had given him when it was his Blobday.

"Bye mom!" Bob exclaimed in a exited tone.

"Bye son, wait have you got your lighter, sword, flashfright, underwear and how about..."

"Mom I'll be ok" he said and hugged his mom and off he went on a long wonderous path of secrets and myth. So he left Goowey village and started heading east out of the borders. He wanted to see a human he had heard so many stories about them.

A little while later he came upon a old Blobwen and Blobman pushing a cart up a steep hill. "Do you need help miss?" Bob asked.

"Yes please young Blobman. We have been pushing this cart for an hour."

They pushed and pushed and finally got the cart to the top of the utterly steep hill. Bob was panting like a dog. "Thank you young Blobman. Are you with someone here?" asked the old Blobwen.

"I am Bob and I am on an adventure to see what lies beyond the borders of Goowey village." Answered Bob. "And who are you?"

"Oh I'm Millenda and this is my husband Garlard we are going to mine in a mine in another village" explained Millenda.

"Can I come with you?" asked Bob.

They stopped and they looked around nervously. "You can come with if you want but..."

"But what?" Asked Bob excitedly.

"You have to be ready for monsters!" Garlard said in a loud boom. Suddenly their was strange sounds from everywhere and a blood curling screech every now and again "Their here!" said Garlard with shock.

Then a loud voice spoke "Yes, we are here!"


Well that's the end of it, hope you liked it.

Part 1Part 2
Part 1 you are here!Part 2 coming soon!

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Well... talk about a "cliffhanger"! Or... hmm. Would it be a "blobhanger"? 😆

I see many references to things I feel are important (as a parent of course). Asking if Blobwen needed help pushing the cart uphill. Manners... respect. Or a connection of family values, between Bob Blob and his Mom:


"Bye son, wait have you got your lighter, sword, flashfright, underwear and how about..."


It does indeed seem like you have inherited your Father's writing skills, and I look forward to seeing part 2, as well as what stories you might share with us next! Late reply sorry!! Hope you have a great weekend young man!

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Thank you so much!

Well, well, another writer in the making! Thanks for the special mention, @merenludick 😊

This is a great start to your story. Very well done!

Thanks @therneau I am going to be doing Part 2 soon.😉

I see you have inherited your father's story telling talent. Keep practicing, even if you don't want to. I'm curious to see what monsters are going to emerge!

Mawahahahaaa I am planning gruesome ,goer and monstrous things to happen.

I am very proud!

(ENG) Hi, how nice to see children writing such wonderful things, you are the future of the platform and soon you will become great writers, I really liked your post. I want to give you a tip that can help you improve, the first 5 tags you should place are so that the search engine can locate your content and the other 5 are free, ie you can receive tokens and support from some communities for using them, clarified this, I suggest you use tags like writing, story, Literature, Literature, Book, and others before the tokens. You can tag me in your next post if you like. Best regards

(ESP) Hola que bueno ver a niños escribiendo cosas tan maravillosas, ustedes son el futuro de la plataforma y pronto se convertirán en grandes escritores, me gusto mucho tu publicación. Quiero darte un consejo que puede ayudarte a mejorar, las primeras 5 etiquetas que debes colocar son para que el buscador pueda ubicar tu contenido y las otras 5 son libres, es decir puedes recibir tokens y apoyo de algunas comunidades por usarlas, aclarado esto, te sugiero utilizar etiquetas como writing, story, Literature, Book, y otras más antes de las de tokens. Puedes etiquetarme en tu próximo post si gustas. Un saludo

A good start! You'd be something like a native blockchain writer, cool! Add me to the list, please. !PIZZA !LUV

Such a lovely story😍
Omg
I hope Bob will be okay😱
I do Enjoy fictional fantasy. Bravo👏

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This is awesome my boy!!! Well done! <3

Thanks for the comment love you mom

I love you too!!!!!

love you more!!!!!

Immmmmmmmmmmpossible! 🤣😍

Millenda! Great name and great story and artwork!

Now I just realized that Millenda sounds like @melinda010100 !

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Well, would you look at that! Another young budding writer! I really liked the Blobwen and Blobwena, hehe. Will definitely keep an eye out for the next part to see what Bob the Blob gets up to!

Hold on! Don't stop there! Monsters are coming? 😳
When is Part 2? 😉

Can't wait to read more of this Blobby adventure. You should connect with @Gracepro as well. Another young writer.

such talent your boy has there!

Really cool! I wonder what will happen next!😄😍🌸🌺

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Hi meren , Well done !
And I kinda like blob story now
Good luck and say hi to mum and dad