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RE: The Horrors of Kwiksave: The Date (Part One)


It has been one long month since you wrote this part. It has been a long wait for part II
(Sir I am stopping short of saying that the wait is pretty agonizing.)
Am I being nosy or maybe I am finding your style of story telling very captivating, well I am not very sure.
However I do know I am keen to know how the next part of the events unfold.
I wish you good health and I have no qualms in saying that you are truly blessed to have the ability to tell stories in such a captivating way.
I know this is not a story but how life unfolded for you. however reading it does make me take a walk through the Kwiksave store though I have never visited one.Dear @slobberchops

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I am finding your style of story telling very captivating, well I am not very sure.
However I do know I am keen to know how the next part of the events unfold.

Thanks for the audience! I am not sure who reads these, or I am writing to nobody? I will endeavour to get Part II done soon.

Actually the experience of reading these is like walking with you feeling the stress of the situations experiencing the slightest detail.
I feel I am living the part and special taking me back to the time when I was relatively young.
Though in another part of the world.
It is so relatable and not everyone has this skill or shall I say a true gift


I am your audience all right but I very strongly feel you talent deserves a bigger audience.
Since you are already doing the hard work of writing.
Any reasons for not putting it on Amazon as an ebook?
The posts you make here could have backlinks to your ebook and can perhaps be used to send traffic to amazon book with the right keywords.
So that you may get even more income from sales and the royalty .
Also you could change the name of the store and characters just to avoid any copyright issues.
Just a thought :)Dear @slobberchops

I am getting together with a writer next month who does publish at the HIVE meetup. I will ask him about this.