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RE: Fabian Story: Being White and Foreign [ENG-ESP]

in Writing Club3 years ago

Bravo! Your story is excellente!

God had painted them differently, so that his parents would not confuse them.

These lines are especially powerful.

Wow, Fabian went through a lot! Honestly, there is so much racism and bullying in this story, that it actually makes me sad. But at the end, who cares? As long as Fabian is happy in the end and has a very good friend, then everything is good. No?

Great story dear!