We found each other
In each other's arms, the sun would
I found myself stumbling on this; the repeat of "each other" distracted me from the later intensity of the poem.
You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
We found each other
In each other's arms, the sun would
I found myself stumbling on this; the repeat of "each other" distracted me from the later intensity of the poem.
I don't follow.
When I'm reading poetry, I tend to stumble on repeat phrases so close together. My mind wants to say "can we mix the words to re-expess or re-interpreate the previous phrase."
Hmm. I don't edit what my mind births but thank you for pointing that out.
Wow! I rehash and rework mine.
If I rehash mine, two things end up happening. I obsess over everything little detail and perfectionism cripples sharing or I ruin it.