🎵Vibes WEEK II - VALI - original song by @shemZee

in Vibes10 months ago (edited)

Dear friends.
For week 2 of the contest I recorded a song of mine called VALI / Its raining. I used a poem written by NS /a great poet as youll see/
The poem "It's Raining" by NS explores themes of longing, perfection, and pain through vivid imagery and emotional depth. Through the metaphor of rain, the poet captures the captivating and promising nature of existence.

Para la segunda semana del concurso, grabé una canción mía llamada VALI / Está lloviendo.
Utilicé un poema escrito por NS /un gran poeta como verán/.
El poema "Está lloviendo" de NS explora temas de anhelo, perfección y dolor a través de imágenes vívidas y profundidad emocional. A través de la metáfora de la lluvia, el poeta captura la naturaleza cautivadora y prometedora de la existencia.

English translation:

It's raining... so captivating, so promising,
If my soul were music,
It would be
From Madzhini's violin.
If it were
a word,
It would be 'wild.'
If it were a poet, it would be
Just like you.

And you are simply perfect,
You have only one flaw,
Me.
And you are simply perfect,
You have only one pain,
Me.

It's raining... on the frets
Carrying within them
Drawings,
Do you know where
The place of the sun is?

It's raining...
So captivating, so promising,
If my soul were music,
It would be
From Madzhini's violin.
If it were
a word,
It would be 'wild.'
If it were a poet, it would be
Just like you.

And you are simply perfect,
You have only one flaw,
Me.

And you are simply perfect,
You have only one pain,
Me.
Está lloviendo... tan cautivador, tan prometedor,
Si mi alma fuera música,
Sería
Del violín de Madzhini.
Si fuera
una palabra,
Sería 'salvaje.'
Si fuera un poeta, sería
Exactamente como tú.

Y tú simplemente eres perfecta,
Solo tienes una falla,
Yo.
Y tú simplemente eres perfecta,
Solo tienes un dolor,
Yo.

Está lloviendo... en los trastes
Llevando en su interior
Dibujos,
¿Sabes dónde
Está el lugar del sol?

Está lloviendo...
Tan cautivador, tan prometedor,
Si mi alma fuera música,
Sería
Del violín de Madzhini.
Si fuera
una palabra,
Sería 'salvaje.'
Si fuera un poeta, sería
Exactamente como tú.

Y tú simplemente eres perfecta,
Solo tienes una falla,
Yo.

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@shemzee I really liked the music he created and his performance. I liked your black and white video. All very good. Thanks for sharing. Success in the contest.

@shemzee me gustó mucho la música que creó y su interpretación. Me gustó su vídeo en blanco y negro. Todo muy bueno. Gracias por compartir. Éxito en el concurso.

Thank you very much for watching & listening and for your kind words!

Amazing entry, keep it up

I will, thank you very much

An extraordinary, exceptional, and joyful presentation. I congratulate you for the excellent interpretation you have given. I have enjoyed it from start to finish. Nice to meet you and listen to you. You are a great artist brother.

I really liked this song, I had never heard it before and your interpretation is great, congratulations my friend.

Thank you for your kind words

Wonderful Composition!

Como siempre es un gusto escucharlo maestro, muy buena vibra para tu participación, y bendiciones...

"¡Muchas gracias por tu amable comentario, danieldedosd2! Me siento halagado por tus palabras. Recuerdo con cariño a ti y a tu difunta esposa, María, una bella cantante y una persona llena de luz. Aprecio mucho tu apoyo y tus bendiciones. ¡Te deseo un día lleno de buenas vibraciones también!"