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Thanks for participating,, next entry should definitely be much longer, at least 2 minutes minimally, I hope you can improve the sound quality of the beat inside the video and not playing it from a separate speaker box from the side of your phone, it has a lot of distortion, the beat sounds cool though
I also think your flow could have been sharper. but I like the energy, you were a off beat at the end of your verse because you rushed it
Take your time and tattoo your flow to the drums, even if the drums drop out, you are still the rhythm that needs to be maintained, looking forward to your improvements.

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