This was a pretty solid entry
You had some creative changes into your own rendition cover
Of Mi Amor and I appreciate the effort and energy you put in
The second line was a bit questionable though
Why would you say that you are naive and hope that your
Future is somewhere in Gomorrah?
That's one of the two cities God burned down with fire and brimstone
Because of how wicked and evil they were
I found that quite interesting that you would sing that
It makes me ponder your second verse even more, who are you speaking about? Is it God?
Anyway, that was overall a solid performance, some parts seemed to be a bit too high for your vocal range but you gave it a good try
You can only get better with practice. Keep creating, sharing and having fun
-@Verbal-D: Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge
The line being referred to, says: "maybe I'm naive to think my future is somewhere in Gomorrah"
Meaning I could think my future was in Gomorrah, (a place for destruction) because I was naive/ignorant.Thank you @verbal-d for the candid observation.
Point taken, I will do well to work better on my high notes and communicate better with my lyrics.
Thank you.