You performed this Hip Hop song well
I enjoyed your entire entry from start to finish
Next time you do more rapping
Try showing even more energy
And passion for the song
Just like how Eminem shows in his music
You gotta feel the music and rap with conviction
And the listeners have to believe you
So they can resonate in the moments you are creating
This was one of your best performances, keep improving
Great job
-@Verbal-D Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge
Coming from you, this meant a lot. I really appreciate your words of encouragement and I will keep your words in mind.Thanks boss @verbal-d