You have a good strong voice, reminds me of an R. Kelly or Tyrese style of vocal
This was a nice effort and you performed pretty well, good control and energy
Although some high notes seemed to be uncomfortable for you to deliver it smoothly
Your attempt to mimic the melody at the end deviated from your original singing style that you started with and sounded a a bit strange and too unnatural
I wouldn't want you to make the same attempt for a future entry, as you have potential to give a great entry if you become aware of your strengths and how to sing with great control, comfortability and care
I hope this constructive criticism pushes you in the right direction
Solid entry, keep practicing, sharing and performing
And continue having fun!
-@Verbal-D: Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge