Yo Bryan, good to see you back this week, nice bounce and freestyle flow
keep practicing and sharpening that flow, I want to hear more chest voice and energy and passion out of you, it will increase the conviction and believability in your bars/lyrics
Your diction and pronunciation has gotten better
The beat is way too quiet... please balance the music with your vocals next time. Try and add the beat directly into the video. Especially since you use capcut, it is possible.
Hope that helps
Well noted, will save that for next time.