Great effort. Your voice has a lovely tone to it. To really showcase your talent, finding a quieter recording space would be beneficial. I completely understand that's not always possible, but it would make a big difference.
Vocally, you have good control, and with some refinement, it'll be even more stunning. Experimenting with a backing track could add depth to your melody. Also, consider extending your video duration to at least 2 minutes. We want to enjoy more of your singing! Looking forward to your next entry.
GospelMusician/Singer/Songwriter/
Rapper/Beat Producer/Pianist/& An Official Vibes Judge
@Verbal-D & The Vibes Team