This is your best entry to date,
Loved the cover song choice,
Your energy was completely different than any other entry you have given us
You have stepped out of your shell and opened up more of the potential you have to give a great live performance.
This entry was great because of the lyrical content and thoughtful rhetoric being used and the contrast of faith and hopelessness and wanting answers.
Your energy helped to deliver the song with good tonality, the flow was rhythmic but not perfect, you were off in multiple areas slightly, memorizing the lyrics would help a lot, it is definitely possible, these are minor things to work on for the future, your breath control is another thing you have to focus on so you can inhale quickly enough to spit and rap the whole lines and not rush over them, which also affects your delivery pronunciation and technical transitioning
Overall I liked the attitude, the content and the effort. A big improvement indeed, more body language, and interactive performance with facial expression and vocal dynamics of loud, quiet, and sound bending melodically will further enhance your performance level/. Keep practicing and experimenting with your flow.
Thank you so much sir.
I will take note of all you have said and try to work on them. you actually filtered all the issues I had creating this track. I will try to do better next time and I am very happy to confirm my improvement. I very excited to know that you like my entry. God bless.