Hey there. See you're new on Hive and in the community. Welcome!
Two points of constructive criticism:
Emojies all over your paragraphs makes it both annoying and hard to read. It does not enhance your content in any way. When you make a picture heavy post like this I would recommend being a little more picky with your images. Make sure you're not showing off the same thing over and over again. Carefully pick and choose the images so that every second of your posts seems relevant.
Hope to see you stick around and evolve on the platform.
Thanks for the suggestions. I will keep these things in mind from now on. Thanks for commenting. Have a good day.