Small advice: Try to bring a structure in your content with some summaries and recaps. In the whole text I could not find a description what is this game about. At least a one-line or a link to an introductory post would be appreciated. Your visuals look awesome but they don´t help too much in this direction either.
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[@PowerPaul:] Thank you very much for your feedback. That's exactly what I'm working on right now: all the facts, presented on the website. Your feedback clarifies the need/urgency for me.