Good evening Danny,@crowblique, welcome to Hive and to the [Be Entrepreneur] community (https://peakd.com/c/hive-140971/created).
I was going to leave you a comment to give you some suggestions for your presentation, however, the friend @chillwithshanna already left you the pertinent orientations, which are convenient to follow, so that your stay in the platform flows in harmony.
Likewise, we suggest you read and put into practice the community publishing guide
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