I really enjoyed your essay! It was fun and creative, and I loved the way you used orange objects to represent happiness and energy.
I especially liked the part about the clownfish. They are such happy and playful creatures, and they really do seem to have a zest for life. I think that's a great message to send, especially in today's world.
I also thought it was funny how the apricot disappeared. I'm not sure if you were trying to make a point with that, but it definitely made me laugh.
I hope the message can reach the readers and make a positive impact.
Haha, so sure it was the point, I was having fun doing the magical trick (eating the apricot 😂 )