I'm afraid the translation to English is a bit clumsy. Is it as awkward in reverse? I speak no Spanish at all beyond a handful of words, doubtless mispronounced horribly.
Me temo que la traducción al inglés es un poco torpe. ¿Es igual de torpe a la inversa? No hablo nada de español más allá de un puñado de palabras, sin duda mal pronunciadas.
Hi, I find your translation acceptable, I don't understand why using the same platform my translation seems clumsy... but thank you very much for your review I will take into account the language issues to try to improve!