Very good writing and style, I enjoyed reading, although with difficulty, given the barriers that are in front of me due to my poor English.
You have an original approach to the Ego, a benevolent approach that I did not think of. I see only the negative side, maybe because I can't stand selfishness. The real selfish people I know.
It seems to me that you sometimes make a rapprochement between ego and consciousness. I believe that the ego is not perceived by those touched, just as crazy people do not realize that they are crazy. I'm an opponent of the selfish and I probably can't be objective.
Once again, your elaborate and cursive writing is enjoyable to read and reveals a person who has the tools and the habit of writing. Good luck in the contest, I think you are among the favorites.
Thanks. :)
Yeah ego has it's benefits, too. Nothing in psychology is black and white. Everything has its' benefits.
I think that's good!