If what you were aiming for was a friendly sweet flowing writer then you've got it here @antonym. But to be honest, from this write-up the writer doesn't seem to have a lot of info and insight to offer, but still a friendly sweet flowing writer. You get what I mean?
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Thanks for the feedback. Yeah. I think I know what you mean. It could use a bit more substance. But many writers on POB lack substance. I'm not going to rule her out for that. The post performed well and it was the first try. There's always a chance for development.