In the Land of the Gods ... (Episode 2) Beyond Games their is life

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if you wanted to read about my First Episode here you can read.

Who would want to wake up early in the morning if they get a soft bed at night after riding a bike all day long? I went and was shown the way to the washroom. When everyone woke up, I started making breakfast. Muneeb Bhai joined hands to help me. Succeeded. After filling their stomachs, everyone started repairing their own booth.

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Greetings and thank you for choosing to use the Proof of Brain Community for your Hive publishing needs. I noticed that you are posting this article in a number of communities. Doings so means that you are making active duplicate posts throughout Hive and such a behavior is not condoned. The reason it is not condoned is by duplicating you are seeking multiple rewards for the same article.

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Have a great day and I hope you enjoy your weekend.

The post is not bad, but 20x the post is. Rewards will be removed if this continues.

One other issue I found was with respect to your use of images and language. Did you capture all these images? Some of your text is also confusing, for example:

Spent some time there. Worshiped the stomach and the return was getting more and more dangerous for us. Go to hot springs or not. Some comrades were worried because of unpaved road, some long way. Well, it was decided to drink hot spring water. So the road was paved. After 20 km the dirt road slowed down but the beauty increased.

"Worshipped the stomach" - Can you elaborate? Did you mean you were eating? Also, I didn't know it was safe to drink hot spring water. Why was the return getting more and more dangerous? You've got some beautiful pictures here. It would help with curation to add these details.

Thanks again for your article.