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RE: What Did You Hear About Closure?

Ohhhh... "His face lit up like the fourth of July"?

What's that wordplay? Hahah. Is that some fancy line you made up or something that is generally applicable? I could use some of that line in my day to day diction. Haha. Besides, the date also means something to me.

You know what I love the most about this story?

The dialogue is to die for. Not like 'Die' die. Haha. But you get it. I enjoyed the dialogue and I also enjoyed the civility the lady maintained despite the fact that it would be in her rights to rant and be loud.

Nice going, Jhymi. I enjoyed reading this.

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Ohhhh... "His face lit up like the fourth of July"?
I've seen it in books. I wish I could actually form something that interesting.😂
And yeah, what does the date mean? If you don't mind.

I'm happy you liked my dialogue and the post as well @kenechukwu97. I don't understand my mind too these days. I'm glad you made it here.🤗

Hahah... Permission to add that sophisticated line to my list. I like the way it sounds.

The date is actually my brother's birthday. He's my only brother, so immediately I saw the date there, I couldn't help but smile. Haha.

Your mind is doing wonders ✌️.

Don't worry. You've been granted the permission.😌

Oh....that sounds so nice. I'm happy it made you smile. Thank you so much for your time.🤗