What a hilariously delightful story. Your central idea that snitches get twitches was genius. It's so beautifully original and well written. Loved it.
I hate eye twitches, but I've never had them that bad. It's usually when I'm run down and need some serious vitamins!
I've had them a couple of times too and usually not so bad. But I guess there might be someone who has that curse going around. Lol
Really happy you liked the story, River. Lots of !LUV to you.🤗💕