What a brilliant story. I love the way you describe every scene in a way that helps your readers experience it like they were there. I'm still learning how to do that, I've got a long way to go.
I wondered she kept using one word commands but after your explanation😅, I'd probably only understand one worded commands too if I was high on mushroom infused coffee.
Great story, I'd love to read you again!
Thanks so much. I write a story every now and then, so you might be lucky! I thought my narrator a bit of a high mess - she could barely walk let alone follow detailed instructions! 😂🍄 so very glad you enjoyed it.