Burning in the fire

in Hive Learners2 years ago (edited)

Ignition of sentiments was done by everyone

And none asserted to be the part of this fire

They were relaxed externally

But inwardly and spineless

They were woveing a new quagmire

To hitch my emotions

And to smash me into several chunks

This time I was not being unloved

Rather I met the blackish as being disliked

I was summoned anti state person

My patriotism was called into question

Loyalities of mine were thrown away

What I met face to face was hate

I didn't endured exclusively through this

Because they all stood as one man army

Behind that charismatic leader

Who has vision to unify the nation

He was arrested and attacked

Emotionally hurt tremendous times

But neither he was dishonest

Not he was Coward

All the odds stood against him

Few within the black coats

Multiple having the medals and uniforms

And sticking around were the monarchs

But he was frivolity in his hands

Yet having the whole nation as support

Who stands for someone in such critical time?

Why to quit him when he was the only saviour

When did they ended up as Pakistani?

Where was their patriotism when they bartered Pakistan?

Whom was behind them to obliterate the nation ?

How many you will slaughter?

Why to conceal your black faces??

Truth never metamorphosis

No matter how many clean chits

You earn from you bought courts

Disconnecting the youth from social media

Conducting the drama of anti state activities

Calling us sponsored and counterfeit

I guess you have forgotten the Law of Creator

You are bankrupting the country for own sake

You have zero investment here

But one day you will be questioned

For all these falsehoods and drama

No one would rescue you there

Not the black coats

Nor these neighbors who are behind the door

Dirty Harry policies wouldn't insulate you

You will make everyone tight-lipped

Through your so called secure sources

Which have done only recordings

Since the creation of country

You will buy the morality of public

I don't believe in this supremacy now

As few souls are not born to be paid for

Crucifying the justice

Making the administration sectors guilty

In front of public

Wouldn't help you to rule another 5 years

And how long you will preside over ?

There is no super power except Allah

I was shattered brutally

My eyes dont dream now

I dont think for my future

What if I administer the nation

Will my life as devoted spirit

And some bad governance would crucify me

Calling me traitor as bonus of this virtue

It's too easy to snatch others dreams

I remained the person who yelled patriotism

But now felt everything which I saw

From the surface level was fake

Realities we're hidden from me

But how realizing them

They are hard to engulf

No longer that aspirant is alive

I have saw my family getting hurt

Because of others nasty attitude

I was called with wicked names

That labels dont justify me

And if society believes

I am the facet of this lawlesness

I have no words to deny

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  • Note;

Behind this poem alot of sentiment are involved , due to the wrong policies of others innocent are facing rejection . I am was never despair from the circumstances until now but when my social accounts were dismised for speaking the trurh and publicly i was called with wrong names i was no more the previous aspirants Ayesha. I dont know where to conclude but just asking to remain humble with others as hate speech sometimes becomes the reason of someone's expiry.

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Hello Ayesha I just read your article and I just wanted to say that your thoughts are really powerful. Your account of the suffering and loss brought on by the recent fire in your town is heartbreaking, but your fortitude and will to recover and support one another are admirable. We appreciate you sharing your experience with us and bringing to our attention the importance of human connection and community through trying times.

 2 years ago  

The recent stuff happening in the country not only damages us economically but also disturbed us psychologically and I suppose we both are country fellows. So it's not about town I guess. Well I support the genuine support and feedback hehe.

Yes, I understand that totally. Observing the current status of our country is depressing. To help the issue, we must encourage one another and provide honest advice. We must all work together for a better future since we are all in this together.

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Hi @ayesha-malik,

I'm deeply moved by your poem and the raw emotions you've expressed. It's painful to experience rejection and to have your loyalty questioned. Please remember, your voice matters, and standing for truth, even in adversity, is a testament to your strength. Continue to express yourself and inspire others. Your resilience in these challenging times is commendable.

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 2 years ago  

Hello @ayesha-malik it's good to see you back on Creative Sunday, unfortunately we no longer accept poetry anymore for Creative Sunday. We've included some new categories like music and the likes, you can check them out 😊

 2 years ago  

Hehe as far as I knew some good phrases were acceptable ( someone in the announcement post of creative Sunday updates suggested me to keep creating good phrases) never mind. Hehe thanks for the feedback dude. Would be bringing related content of the latest updates.

 2 years ago  

When I said poems are no longer accepted, I meant for Creative Sunday, because we recently had a change of rules. You can keep on writing poems in the community as long as you don't make use of the #creative-sunday tag 🙂.

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