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RE: MURDER STORY OF TWO SISTERS

in Hive Learners2 years ago (edited)

So she murdered her sister in greed! Am I right?

She was found after years, did she do all this as she was mad or mature enough to property for herself?

That's what I have concluded after so much effort bro, grammatical mistakes and essay style writing confuses the writer. Kindly review, much betterment can happen if you will edit.

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 2 years ago  

Thanks for the feedback bro, Grammarly also commits mistakes that's why re-read it again and again . it would take possibly 5 minutes. But more comfortable for readers.
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