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 2 years ago (edited) 

Okay, that's good 👍.
I just went through it again and I still saw some errors, you should take your time to read through it, try not to be in a haste.

Also Some of the names you mentioned will never get the mention because you didn't mention their names right.

You need to make people want to read to the end, with your grammatical errors, they might just not be interested.