I didn't know there was an adult version - this review was actually written years ago (2019 to be precise), when I tried the demo for a website that wanted a review of it. Once I finished the demo, I forgot all about it up until now. For some reason, I was thinking about it yesterday...
I didn't particularly think that much of this visual novel, but the review was written in such a way to not annoy advertisers...
Glad someone else found it rather wordy as well. It's not one I would want to return to/start again.