Hi! I tried to read your whole post but I didn't make it, I got lost between the lines. I recommend that for the next one you improve your marking, that is, separate the paragraphs, and try not to make them so long. Use punctuation better, especially the semicolon. Also, try to summarize your content, you don't need to be so long. Very few people read such a long post.
I recommend you look for markup guides in Hive or on YouTube to get an idea of what I'm talking about. Or failing that, on Monday I plan to publish a post about it in the #Aliento community.
In any case, I think your content was fine, but the structure of the text as such was not. Regards!