The modifications to the pose definitely made it a lot better :) Is she kicking around in the water of a swimming pool (what I initially assumed when I saw the title) or prancing around on a beach? That's the only thing I'm not sure about with this pose and with that background XD
Oh I did say pool didn't I >u< It's supposed to be a beach and she's playing with the ball! I can maybe move the water forward and add some splash effect later on ^^
Well the playing with the ball part is obvious enough ;D and it looks like it's shaping up to be a beach, as I said I was just confused by the title vs what I could see in the background :D
Oh! The 'Pool Party' part >u<
It's a reference for a League of Legends skin line :>
But yeah, it doesn't make much sense because she's in a beach so I might have to change that >u<