You are so clever, @kemmyb. I admire you for experimenting a bit with a tried and true formula. You have in a way broken the fourth wall, by having a minor character self aware. It is an amazing breakthrough. I read a lot of stories, day after day. What a nice refreshing treat it is to read something so original. Thank you!
Thank you so much for this heartwarming comment. ☺️ The story started as a fleeting thought—I wondered what it would be like to give voice to those characters often in the shadows and tell the story from their perspective. Rather than focus on the victim or queen bee in this story, I thought why not tell it from one of her minions' perspective. Not all of them might agree with her bullying.
I'm happy you found it refreshing and original; it means a lot to me. Thanks again for your visit and support.
!PIMP