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RE: Finding Home

in Freewriters3 months ago

I like this second person perspective, really gives a different feel to the entire story and paints the pictures in my mind a different way.

It's sad to see that after everything she'd been through she was betrayed like that, but the ending brought some sigh of relief, and could be the start of something beautiful.

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You!!!! You!!!!! I will hold that your tiny neck!!!

Sorry ehn 😂 😂

Come and show me the painting that it painted in your mind o. I hope it's good.😂

the start of something beautiful.

That's the key phrase.🌺
I'm glad you enjoyed it, dear.