EL ALMA ERRANTE /THE WANDERING SOUL

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Veo un personaje como sacado de como de un cuento.
Siento miedo
Jarris, un hombre solitario del pueblo, vivía en soledad. Poco se sabía de su vida, siempre se le veía cabizbajo al pasar, como si llevara un peso sobre sus hombros que no le permitía caminar erguido. Los habitantes del pueblo le tenían miedo por su aspecto oscuro y sombrío. Un día, unos adolescentes curiosos idearon un plan para espiarlo en su casa.Encontraron un túnel subterráneo que atravesaba toda la ciudad. Recordaron que en algún momento habían escuchado que la casa de Jarris estaba conectada a este túnel, por lo que tomaron la decisión de aventurarse a explorarlo .Era la medianoche cuando entraron en el túnel con velas encendidas y comenzaron a caminar. Michael, uno de los adolescentes, de repente sintió un intenso frío y escalofríos, así que decidió regresar. Por otro lado, Cristofer y David estaban muy intrigados y decidieron seguir adelante. Después de caminar durante 40 minutos, empezaron a percibir un olor desagradable, similar al de un cuerpo en estado de descomposición. A pesar del miedo que sintieron, decidieron continuar caminando. Finalmente, alumbraron una rata muerta en medio del camino y entendieron el origen del olor. En ese momento, Cristofer le dijo a David: ¿Te imaginas qué vamos a encontrar en esa casa?. David, con temor, respondió: Esto me está empezando a asustar. Sin embargo, Cristofer intentó calmarlo diciendo: Tranquilo, sigamos. De repente, se encontraron con una una escalera de metal corroída por los años que llegaba a una tapa de metal en forma de círculo y ambos se miraron sorprendidos. Decidieron subir y empujar la tapa, para su fortuna o desgracia era la entrada a la casa de Jarris. Al entrar, se percataron de que estaba vacía y abandonada por el tiempo. Todo en el interior lucía viejo y sin uso, lo que les resultaba extraño ya que no entendían cómo alguien podría vivir en ese lugar. Pasaron horas esperando, pero nadie apareció. De pronto, Un lamento resonó, se escuchaba desde el interior de las paredes. Era tan estruendoso que Cristofer y David, sobresaltados, salieron corriendo despavoridos, bajando las escaleras de un solo impulso sin siquiera pensarlo. Ahora, el camino de regreso estaba sumido en la oscuridad, ya que habían dejado sus velas en aquella casa.Corrieron a toda velocidad como si alguien estuviera detrás de ellos, hasta que finalmente vieron una luz al final del túnel. Justo en ese momento, el amanecer comenzaba a iluminar el horizonte. Al salir, se encontraron con Jarris parado en la entrada del túnel. Lo observaron fijamente a los ojos por primera vez y notaron que tenía una mirada perdida y ausente. Cristofer se asustó tanto que se hizo orino y David quedó completamente paralizado, mientras que Harris los ignoró y se adentró en el túnel.Cristofer y David, exhaustos con sus piernas temblorosas, lograron regresar a casa como pudieron. Al día siguiente, se encontraron con Michael y le relataron en detalle lo que habían experimentado la noche anterior. Y ambos concluyeron que Harris no era un ser humano, sino más bien un alma errante que deambulaba a través del tiempo y del espacio. Michael quedó completamente sorprendido y desconcertado ante esta revelación.

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I see a character as if taken from a story.
I'm scared of it
Jarris, a lonely man from the village, lived in solitude. Little was known about his life, he always looked crestfallen when passing by, as if he carried a weight on his shoulders that did not allow him to walk upright. The townspeople were afraid of him because of his dark and gloomy appearance. One day, some curious teenagers devised a plan to spy on him in his house. They found an underground tunnel that ran through the entire city. They remembered that at some point they had heard that Jarris's house was connected to this tunnel, so they made the decision to venture out to explore it. It was midnight when they entered the tunnel with lit candles and began walking. Michael, one of the teenagers, suddenly felt intense cold and chills, so he decided to return. On the other hand, Cristofer and David were very intrigued and decided to move forward. After walking for 40 minutes, they began to smell an unpleasant odor, similar to that of a decomposing body. Despite the fear they felt, they decided to continue walking. Finally, they saw a dead rat in the middle of the road and understood the origin of the smell. At that moment, Cristofer said to David: Can you imagine what we are going to find in that house? David, with fear, responded: This is starting to scare me. However, Cristofer tried to calm him down by saying: Don't worry, let's continue. Suddenly, they found a metal ladder corroded by the years that reached a metal top in the shape of a circle and they both looked at each other in surprise. They decided to go up and push the lid, for their fortune or misfortune it was the entrance to Jarris's house. Upon entering, they realized that it was empty and abandoned by time. Everything inside looked old and unused, which seemed strange to them since they didn't understand how anyone could live in that place. They spent hours waiting, but no one showed up. Suddenly, a wailing sound could be heard from inside the walls. It was so loud that Cristofer and David, startled, ran away in terror, descending the stairs in a single impulse without even thinking about it. Now, the way back was plunged into darkness, since they had left their candles in that house. They ran at full speed as if someone was behind them, until finally they saw a light at the end of the tunnel. Just then, dawn was beginning to light up the horizon. As they exited, they found Jarris standing at the entrance to the tunnel. They looked him straight in the eyes for the first time and noticed that he had a lost and absent look. Cristofer was so scared that he wet himself and David was completely paralyzed, while Harris ignored them and went deeper into the tunnel. Cristofer and David, exhausted with their trembling legs, managed to return home as best they could. The next day, they met with Michael and told him in detail what they had experienced the night before. And they both concluded that Harris was not a human being, but rather a wandering soul wandering through time and space. Michael was completely surprised and taken aback by this revelation.
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Quite an adventure for these young people ... and how sad for the resident of that house!

Un alma en pena, a los jóvenes les gusta la aventura

Una historia muy intrigante, puede ser cierto que sea un alma errante que no ha encontrado su perdón.

Saludos

Sí, es cierto, gracias por leer.

@laurel, Este contenido es de mi creación y autoría,es delicado hacer ese tipo de acusaciones, Sí use, una herramienta para mejorar la redacción del contenido. Pero por eso no sé puede tachar de que fue escrito por un programa de Internet. Y creo que el concurso pone a prueba es la creatividad de cada participante.

@lauril did not read you otherwise noticed you started with Spanish! Strange how people invest time in cooy-pasting text into a tool but don't read the entire post!

Sounds like LOPOB - lack of proof of brain

Come on, you are detecting her own story! Try to use your own brain too @lauril instead of counting 100% on AI!

Btw AI writes how certain people write that is how it learns.

You proved you did not read otherwise you would have noticed she started in Spanish!

No te quejes después que otros utilicen la IA en sus retos…

Don't complain after others use AI in their challenges...

I checked with 3 different and no result! You blame someone for using her own content!

A lack of proof of brain - read the entire post before you make accusiations!

Shame on you!

Lógicamente que la escribí en español primero, porque es mi lengua materna, no manejo el inglés, si lee la publicación se dará cuenta que use un traductor Google. Sí no se entiende la traducción al ingles no es mi culpa. Tampoco es para recibir ese tipo de comentarios porque hice mi esfuerzo y invertí mi tiempo en hacerlo.

I think Jarris is Harris?
Both boys were ghosthunting without realizing it.

Thank you for sharing this story. 👍

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