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RE: 8 November 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2550: a rather dull essay

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He just might ... this might get serious when Not-so-Little Robert and Vertran are 21 and 25, not five and nine! But, chances are, Vertran and Louisa will either fall in love for real at an appropriate age, or realize their mistake at the appropriate age and just decide to stay friends ... but Vertran will always treat Louisa well, and Lil' Robert would then have a fair chance when he reaches the appropriate age, but from four years behind them.

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I can see it all happening.