Oscuridad.

in Freewriters3 years ago (edited)

Hola a todos, estoy compartiendo una creación en prosa poética para participar en el Free Write House Poetry Club agradeciéndoles de antemano su apoyo.

Su silencio atrae mi alma
es grito que baña mi cuerpo,
limpiando bien cada trazo,
llenándome de misterio.

Esa sombra que atraviesa la luz,
mensaje que me quema rosas,
susurrándome verdades,
ocultando mis mentiras.

Una epístola de mensaje claro,
volcán que vuela libre,
aro que eleva la entrega,
gaviota que explica el himno.

Mi compañera no me abandona,
siempre esta a mi lado

aconsejándome en la distancia,
desde una choza hermosa,
yo en el bohío.

Acercaba su presencia
y yo me alejaba,
buscando no alcanzarle,
mi sueño era su morada.

Me desnudó cual poema,
con un silencio doloroso,
con un beso de despedida
con una lágrima de satisfacción,
sabiéndose mi eterno dolor,
mi triste canción.


Comparto el enlace de @eleazarvo un gran poeta /@eleazarvo/posts

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Hello everyone, I am sharing a poetic prose creation to participate in the Free Write House Poetry Club thanking you in advance for your support.

His silence attracts my soul
a cry that bathes my body,
cleaning each line well,
filling me with a lot of essence.

That shadow that pierces the light
message that burns me,
whispering truths to me,
hiding my lies.

An epistle with a clear message,
volcano that flies free,
hoop that elevates delivery,
seagull explaining the hymn.

My companion * does not abandon me,
is always by my side *
advising me in the distance,
from a beautiful hut,
I in the hut.

She was getting closer
and I was walking away,
I tried to reach her
my dream was his abode.

I undressed like a poem,
with a painful silence,
with a goodbye kiss
with a tear of satisfaction,
knowing my eternal pain,
my great sin.

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Chacho... Tremenda prosa... Gracias por la mención... Un abrazo, manito...

Honor a quien honor merece y vos sos un crack que merece reconocimiento.

Felicitaciones, @franvenezuela, por este poema de la ausencia la distancia que llega al corazón.

Gracias 🙏