Poem 8# Immutable/ poema 8# Inmutable Eng/Esp

in Freewriters3 years ago

Good morning hive people, here I bring poem #8 of 100 poems that I was able to collect in a notebook during the pandemic, I hope you like it and I look forward to your comments.

IMMUTABLE

I'm tired of explaining to you that I'm the only one who understands you.
The more arguments I make to convince you.
you understand me less.
So I kept quiet.
the words gnaw at my stomach
throat.
relieved her with alcohol.
It seemed better to spend my hours drinking than thinking about how to accept the shitty reality that had bought me.
Then the alcohol became sweeter than your kisses.
my routines were no longer with you.
if not with the desire to drink recording you.
To the things that held me to you.
let me go.
while you presented yourself more human.
I fell in love more.
to the level that seeing you real.
I idealized you perfect in your mistakes.
I forgot that everything changes.
Lost in reality I couldn't accept that we evolved.
that you are reborn in the sunflowers.
while I delude.
I was just looking at the image I built of you.
Later.
like now.
Smoking.
having a drink of alcohol.

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Takehiko

Buenos días gente de hive, acá traigo el poema #8 de 100 poemas que pude recopilar en un cuaderno durante la pandemia, espero les guste y espero sus comentarios.

INMUTABLE

Me he cansado de explicarte que soy el único que te entiende
mientras más argumentos fabrico para convencerte
tú menos me entiendes.
Así que callaba
las palabras me carcomían el estómago
la garganta.
La aliviaba con alcohol.
me parecía mejor gastar mis horas tomando que pensando en cómo asumir la realidad de mierda que me había comprado.
Entonces el alcohol se volvió más dulce que tus besos.
mis rutinas ya no eran contigo.
si no con las ganas de tomar recordándote.
a las cosas que me aferraban a ti.
Me deje llevar.
mientras te presentabas más
humana.
más me enamoraba.
al nivel que viéndote real.
te idealicé perfecta en tus errores.
olvidé que todo cambia.
perdido en la realidad no pude aceptar que evolucionamos.
que tu renacías en los girasoles.
mientras que yo iluso.
solo observaba la imagen que construí de ti.
Luego.
como ahora.
Fumando.
bebiéndome un trago de alcohol.

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Takehiko
Ilustración de takehiko inoue
Agradecimientos a @betavirosis por el separador

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Que bonito. Felicidades

Interesante tu trabajo poético de carácter confesional, como fue llamada cierta poesía estadounidense hecha en los años 60-70. La relación amorosa parece ser el campo más preciado para esa expresión. Lo importante es que no se quede solo en catarsis. Saludos, @gatoguedexz.

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