This is a tremendous piece of writing, @galenkp. Very powerful. Though it is fiction, it feels like there is a whole of truth here. I hope writing stories about your time in service helps with your healing.
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I like writing fiction and often write it in the first person so I can avoid the he/she scenario and the need to make up names which I find tedious. I think it can bring the reader a little closer to the story also, as they have to say the words I and me putting them into the moment.
Thanks for your comments, I appreciate you taking the time to read what is a fairly long piece, then taking the time to comment.