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RE: Uprising In Gonjolard (Part 8) | Freewrite: 3/22/24 | Prompt: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words

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I'm applauding the protagonists in this chapter as Lauryn makes everything clear to Alphonse. I'm sure he must have been plotting how to deal with Vicar Tibost and the others for the betrayal hehe, but it's a smart plan or how else will the SOB win this war? The secrecy is key.

I'm keeping my fingers crossed for the next chapters and hoping nothing goes wrong for the SOBs because the best-laid plans of mice and men often go awry! They deserve their freedom and some justice. I wonder how king Hartfelt will handle the situation that is about to unfold. Captivating. Thanks for sharing and have a great day. !PIMP

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Yes, @kemmyb Lauryn has succeeded in reaching Alphonse and delivering the SOB's plan and the part he will play. I'm sure he had plenty time to fume in the dungeon for the supposed betrayal he felt. I hope he can come to terms with it and accept his role. As Lauryn said, many pieces were divvied up so that no one knew the full story in case one was captured. The rack can be a painful, but convincing tool to truthfulness.

I'm also hoping that all the planning goes well. Secrets abound and will be exposed as the protagonists move toward Freyja day of the Gonjolard Festival and the uprising if the SOB can manage to pull all sections together. It will be a massive undertaking.

How the king and prince will react will depend upon whether they believe Alphonse and his evidence. Let's hope for the best. It all depends upon this.

Thanks so much for your in-depth analysis of my Part 8 story. I appreciate it, your engagement, and support. Take care.

!LADY


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