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RE: Uprising in Gonjolard (Part 12) | A Picture Is Worth a Thousand Words

in Freewriters5 months ago

Lord Toleranz of the Southeastern Squire Village, parted the crowd and came to rest in front of the spectators.

I cheered in my head at this point in the story. Finally! Someone who stands fearlessly to expose the evils of the prince before the people. I think Gawdawfel gave himself away when he suggested civil war—such a terrible and cruel plan. A good leader would never come up with such.

Now, the uprising begins and Gawdawfel realises he's on his own! Hartfelt is on his way in search of Alphonse. Captivating and well written! The medieval fantasy track is a nice touch, immersed me in the story. Well done. Take care and have a relaxing Sunday. !PIMP

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So happy to hear you liked the medieval fantasy track. It was soothing to listen to and paired well with the festival. Yes, the day of reckoning for Gawdawfel has finally arrived. All his evildoing may be for naught. Let's see how he and others respond.

Thanks for your visit. I'm pleased you liked this chapter. Take care.