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RE: 23 January, 2025 @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2625 | Prompt: director of the movie (director de la película)

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Wait, all of these took place on a film set? Ha, I didn't see that coming. Ingrid's reflections on her loss and betrayal had me wondering what really happened between Antoine and Jeremy. The last paragraph makes me ask if her emotional journey is genuine, or is it simply part of a scripted narrative?

All the same, this is a fine story! You capture the mood and setting vividly. Betrayal will make anyone struggle with trust issue and I'm hoping Ingrid finds closure with Jeremy, if it's not scripted. Nicely done. ✨
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The tragedy took place off script a year before among herself, her husband, and Jeremy. Once she got the call from her agent that she'd landed a role in a movie, she didn't hesitate to accept. The caveat was to work with anyone they paired her with. To her surprise, it was Jeremy, a fellow actor who secretly had feelings for her, hated her husband, and helped get her the role.

Once on set, she recalled the event and the truth that Jeremy exposed about her husband. She felt betrayed by Jeremy and her husband. But once she saw Jeremy, the frozen lake between then melted. He saved her from an adulterous husband, and realized she loved Jeremy.

Coincidence was that the accident happened on the lake.

Thanks so much for your visit and thorough analysis of my story. You were spot on in your review. I appreciate it. Apologies for the late response, but Saturday was my niece's homegoing service.

Take care and have a good start to your week.
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...Saturday was my niece's homegoing service.

😔 I'm so sorry for your loss. My condolence to you and your family. You're in my thoughts and prayers. Do take care.