My story for ZapFicMonday: Paralyzed

in Freewriters2 years ago (edited)

She stared at him as he began to transform into a monster. Meanwhile, terror had mummified her in that corner and closed her eyes. When her ragged breathing couldn't help but draw his attention, fear began to paralyze him as well.

Version in Spanish:

Ella miraba fijamente como él empezaba a transformarse en un monstruo. Mientras tanto, el terror la había momificado en ese rincón y le había cerrado los ojos. Cuando su respiración entrecortada no pudo evitar sino llamar su atención, el miedo también comenzó a paralizarlo.

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Nice use of prompt mate

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