Immediately the burglar broke into the house, he headed straight to the study,
his eyes fixed on the safe hidden behind the giant picture frame hanging on the wall. Unlocking the safe, he emptied the contents into his knapsack and turned to leave, but a voice commanded; "Stand right there!"
Wow all I can imagine now is the shock on his face and the way his body will be shaking
Exactly, all he could think of now is how to escape or maybe the ground will open and swallow him 😂
!BBH
Hahaha he nearly succeeded ooo if not for that thunderous voice stop there and he had no option than to obey thanks for sharing
There was no way he was going to escape because the voice was monitoring him. 😅
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
!BBH
Hahaha no way for him 😂
Aka akpara la ya 🤣🤣
Aka dike for that matter 🙉
Ha! There was a caught, he is really done for.
A very big caught 🤣🤣
I believe he was shocked!
He was indeed. He didn't know someone was in the house.
!BBH
Great piece you have here. Stand right there is the right question for the burglar
Exactly, no more escape for him 😅
Thanks for the support.
!BBH
Stand right there, this is indeed caught in the act
He's in a deep mess 😂
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😂😂😂😂
After all his hard work, he was still caught. Wait o, who caught him? And why did the person wait till the burglar was done before he said stand right there?
Nice short story
The mystery man did 😂
Well, I guess the mystery man was being polite. He didn't want to interrupt his work. That would be rude. So it was better to let him finish up first 😂
Thank you sis.
!BBH
You mean its rude to stop a burglar in his tracks 😂😂😂😂😂 chai o. Make una help me eeeeeee 🏃🏃
This is fantabulous 🤣🤣🤣
What people DON'T analyze is that the thief is more afraid than they are of those they are going to rob, (STAY THERE) and he stopped, well, that's A THIEF, he is already psychologically blamed.
I would like to participate, tell me how I can do it and thank you
I agree with you totally. Thieves are just cowards, the moment they're caught, they are powerless - just pathetic captives.
Here's the link to the contest
https://ecency.com/hive-161155/@zapfic.club/zapficmonday-its-zapfic50-write-a-story-in-precisely-50-words-plus-results-from-last-weeks-zapfic240-contest-ss1xbd
Please read through to know the guidelines before participating. It ends by Thursday, I guess.
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