The Last Walk : A Zapfic Freewrite.

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The accident was terrible, his skull could be seen outside, blood everywhere, the ER were doing there best to cushion the trauma as Marvin was battling for his life. Who is going to hear this, that he slipped on his slippery bathroom floor.
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240 Character Story An entry into @zapfic.club

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You painted a horrible picture in such a small amount of words.
The bathroom can be more dangerous more than we thought

We will try and do better if more words chances are given.
Like a 100 words

Wet legs can cause a lot of dangers.
The bathroom especially titled ones are very dangerous, one should always be careful and mindful of his/her steps.

The damages are brutal too. And can be life threatening.
All in a seconds

Exactly.
We ought to be very careful.

Careful is an understatement, in this part of the world, only GOD can save.
In the western world, slippery tiles aren't something to be use on the floor but on the wall.

You just said it all.
It's only God that can save.