This is a very intriguing story!!!! I hope you continue it. I wanna know what they ate, how they ate it, does it have anything to do with the eyes, and do the children know. For starters. I don't think I ever read any of your prose fiction before, only those fabulous songs you freewrote. So nice to have you here at freewritehouse!!!!
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Thank you! Happy to be back. I also am intrigued by this story, because I have no idea where it's going 😆. Well, very little. The challenging thing about writing episodic fiction on the spot is you're kind of committed to anything once you write it, and that limits the possibilities more and more as the story moves forward. I hope I don't paint myself into too many corners!
(I do know what they ate tho. And I think (?) I know what the whole eye thing is about. Or at least part of it...)