Great story!!!
These three part freewrites are a huge challenge. You went from one prompt to the next seamlessly.
Bummer ending though. I suppose it's good the child has an uncle who will love her, but still...
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Hi, @owasco
Thanks. These are challenging indeed. Most weekends I fail at putting together a coherent story.
I thought about a different ending, but somehow the accumulation of real-life bad endings imposed themselves over a more hopeful outcome.