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RE: Brotherhood in Trouble (An enrtry for @bananafish contest)

in Freewriters4 years ago

A release of the ancient terror birds of lore. And they get captured by the humans? So what next? I feel like (and know) you could have gone on for a thousand more words. The emus are still going to go hungry, the humans will have a new, but very dangerous pet, and elder emu doesn't look like he's got much power left. What's to become of them all? Well done!

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Thank you! Yes, I could have. However, I think the continuation is sort of implied, and even in this chopped up version, I, alas, exceeded the contest word limit. )))