Breaking the silence a brick must have come loose and fallen to the ground.
This part kinda reminded me of God of War II, after Kratos has fought off some humongous beast that had led to the destruction of a building. It always had this kinda eerie feel to it.
This is great writing. You were able to have my entire attention fixated on what this family is going through. I have a tunnel view most times and this story made me oblivious to a couple of people saying hi to me. Wow. You even made me a character and that further endeared the work to me.
I'll try to write something. You see how much you inspire me?
I'm glad to be an inspiration, even if I think my skills are still a bit lacking. I can see a major improvement in them though, as time goes on. Especially since joining Hive I think I've improved a lot. The encouragement means so much to me, I know you have it in you! You're going to come out with a piece of writing that blows mine out of the water!
That's so cool, I'm glad the story was able to capture your attention! Looking forward to reading your submission Thanos.
Sure Mr. @killerwot. Do you like Killowog?
I don't think anyones ever called me that, usually people call me killerwhy, killerhow or killerwhen haha