You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: I AM FRUSTRATED!!!View the full contextrcaine (68)in Freewriters • 5 years ago Good story, you wrote a lot in 5 minutes. Impressive.
I played the plot in my head before typing. If you noticed there were some faucets that were left open because of lack of time to fully develop them.
Also there was the typographical errors here and there.