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RE: Freefall, a Freewrite

in Freewriters3 years ago (edited)

Love it, as usual. The first one is almost like how I fall asleep sometimes. Falling down a trap door.

I recall a kids book once where a kid tried not to drop her jelly beans - as the things that happen after, in a rippling chain of cause/effect, ended up with her being swallowed by a whale. The last line was: 'So, do not drop your jelly beans!'.

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Oh, those rippling chains of cause and effect! If we thought too much about those, we'd never get out of our beds. Some don't.

Thanks for reading, and commenting on, my little story. It's always lovely when you stop by. xo